"Working hard should be given higher priority than having fun"
Do you agree with the statement? Why or why not?
回答例 / SAMPLE Answer
Schools demand students to work hard on their grades and it is making them very stressed. As a high school student, I think having fun should be my priority. Let me explain why.
Firstly,I can be more productive in doing tasks at school when I am in perfect condition. The pressure of getting good grades makes me anxious and sick. That’s why, taking things lightly helps me deal with stressful situations effectively.
Secondly, I am getting older and after high school, I am expected to concentrate more on my studies and should stop fooling around. Having fun gives me experiences necessary for personality development.
To sum up, to have more fun at a young age is important to gain more experiences and to counteract stress.
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